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Post by Lightningscar on Sat May 05, 2012 8:52 pm

Ill put up a first chapter soon. Here are the character descriptions:

SHADOWPACK
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Alpha-Shadow- A pitch black wolf with piercing green eyes.

Betas-Titus- rich brown wolf with midnight blue eyes.
Lightning- brown and tan she-wolf with yellow eyes.

Delta-Dare- Gray she-wolf with bold yellow eyes.

Shaman-Winter- pure white she-wolf with icy blue eyes.

Guardians-Leo- golden wolf with bright blue eyes.
Rage- red wolf with fiery amber eyes.
Zane- black wolf with reddish amber eyes.
Danie- pale gray wolf with dark brown eyes.

Scouts-Blink- long legged tan wolf with blue-green eyes.
Jagger- red wolf with very dark brown eyes.
Adder- A dark brown wolf with pale brown eyes.
Flare- small red she-wolf with dark yellow eyes.

Hunters- Oak- reddish brown wolf with chocolate brown eyes.
Rabbit- pale brown wolf with energetic cinnamon brown eyes.
Sandy- sandy golden she-wolf with yellow eyes.
Vinyl- A black she-wolf with blue-green eyes.

Elders- Duckie- small pale golden she-wolf with pale blue eyes.
Night- ragged pelted graying black wolf with dull silver eyes.

Omega- Snow- small white she-wolf with silvery blue eyes.


ECLIPSEPACK
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Alpha- Eclipse- huge black wolf with a silver underbelly and ominous pale yellow eyes.

Betas- Titan- silver and black wolf with dark brown eyes.
Phantom- gray-white she-wolf with light hazel eyes.

Delta- Phoenix- A dark red wolf with a scar over his left eye and silvery blue eyes.

Shaman- Fog- A small pale gray wolf with unseeing pale blue eyes.

Guardians- Eagle- dark brown she-wolf with a white muzzle, chest, and underbelly and goldenish amber eyes.
Raven- pitch black she-wolf with very dark yellow eyes.
Fox- Red wolf with a bushy tail and dark green eyes.
Train- large silver wolf with cold blue eyes and a long scar down his back.

Scouts- Bear- dark brown wolf with tan underbelly, small rounded ears, and beady black eyes.
Dodge- tall white wolf with one green eye and one blue eye.
Gargoyle- dark gray she-wolf with stony silver eyes.
Comet- pale golden she-wolf with very pale blue eyes.

Hunters- Ren- sandy dark golden wolf with dark green-blue eyes.
Draco- black wolf with white underbelly and vivid amber eyes.
Peach-red she-wolf with bright light amber eyes.
Val- brown she-wolf with white underbelly and harsh green eyes.

Elders- Goliath- black wolf with gray underbelly and very dark brown eyes.

Omegas- Bone- off white wolf with pale brown eyes.
Aiden- red-brown wolf with soulful green eyes.
Windy- pale gray she-wolf with sad blue eyes.
Tornado- dark gray wolf with tons of scars and defeated amber eyes.
Panda- black and white she-wolf with kind brown eyes.



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Re: Shadow's Secret

Post by Gracesong on Sat May 05, 2012 9:00 pm

Can't wait! What's it about?

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Post by Silentshadow on Sat May 05, 2012 9:07 pm

Cool! Any packs?

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Post by Lightningscar on Sat May 05, 2012 9:08 pm

Shadow and the other wolves are a rogue group called ShadowPack. They are all extremely loyal to Shadow because of his awesome fighting and personality. Titus is his 'beta' and is the only one who knows Shadow's secret. What's his secret? Shadow isn't who he claims to be. He is actually a spy from another pack called EclipsePack. The wolves of his pack are all wanted and he was ordered to kill them all! But what happens when Shadow falls in love and doesn't want to leave the pack he's grown to love?

(sucky description, I know, but yup. Smile)

I'll add the other packs later.
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Post by Gracesong on Sat May 05, 2012 9:09 pm

I think it sounds good! Very Happy

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Post by Lightningscar on Sat May 05, 2012 9:10 pm

Thanks, I'm on my iPad and can't make anything really organized at the moment, but will later Smile

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Post by Silentshadow on Sat May 05, 2012 9:11 pm

Haha, I'm on my iPod right now too. Can't type good or fast.

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Post by Gracesong on Sat May 05, 2012 9:14 pm

I'm on my computer, but when I'm on my phone, it's hard to do anything.

So...I like Titus' description the most.

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Post by Lightningscar on Sat May 05, 2012 9:19 pm

Thanks! I got in the descriptive mood more toward the end XD

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Post by Gracesong on Sat May 05, 2012 9:25 pm

Haha, I can tell. Wink It's really good!

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Post by Silentshadow on Sat May 05, 2012 10:17 pm

That's awesome! Yours has a plot. I don't even know the plot of my own fanfic clearly! I'm just planning as I write! xD

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Post by Lightningscar on Sat May 05, 2012 10:17 pm

I honestly winged the plot XD

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Post by Garnet Fire on Sat May 05, 2012 11:37 pm

Love the plot!

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Post by Mooncry on Sat May 05, 2012 11:53 pm

Great plot! I think it's gonna be really good.

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Post by Gracesong on Sat May 05, 2012 11:57 pm

Are you going to write Chapter 1 soon?

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Post by Lightningscar on Sun May 06, 2012 12:13 am

Lol, yeah, soon as I finish the characters. I need my bros to get off the computer first for me to do that though :/

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Post by Silentshadow on Sun May 06, 2012 2:29 am

Poor you. I would just push 'em off! Nah, I'm just kidding! Razz

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Post by Lightningscar on Sun May 06, 2012 2:55 am

Lol, I did >Very Happy

UPDATED! Working on Chapter one!

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Post by Silentshadow on Sun May 06, 2012 4:51 am

It's all white. xD you have to highlight the text to see. I made the color of the text black on my fanfic.

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Post by Lightningscar on Sun May 06, 2012 4:58 am

Chapter one will stay white till I'm done >:]

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Post by Gracesong on Sun May 06, 2012 5:39 am

Haha. I just got what you meant. Razz

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Post by The Magister on Sun May 06, 2012 6:14 am

This is good! Can't wait for more!
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Post by Lightningscar on Sun May 06, 2012 7:19 am

CHAPTER 1 (part 1):
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Shadow slunk into his leader's den, his mind full of questions, but eyes and facial expressions carefully controlled and calm. "You called for me, Eclipse?" the pure black wolf asked, bowing his head slightly in respect. A large black wolf with a silver underbelly rose from where he was sitting in the shadows of the hollowed out tree den. His pale silver eyes glinted mysteriously. The wolf's heavy pawsteps stopped a few tail lengths from Shadow. "Yes....as expected, you came quickly. Now on to business. There is a large group of rogues I need you to dispose of. Do whatever you need to to be able to kill them easily. Take your time and come back once you're done. Titan will take your place as Beta while you're gone." Shadow nodded obediently. " And where am I supposed to find them?" he asked slowly. Eclipse thought for a moment. " The group lives in Nightmare Cave, so around there I suppose."

Shadow almost sighed in exasperation as he left his leader's den. Where in the stars am I supposed to find them?! I definitely do not want to go near Nightmare cave. That place gives me the creeps! Hmmm, that place scares every wolf, maybe they'll be the only ones there.... hopefully. If I mess this up, Eclipse'll kill me! the black wolf thought with dread.

Saying his goodbyes to his pack, Shadow left home for the last time in a while. Sprinting to the spooky cave Eclipse had told him about, sure enough, Shadow saw wolves hanging around it! Luckily, the dark pelted wolf was hidden by the foliage of EclipsePack's forest territory. He could observe them without having to confront him just yet.

After a while of observing the wolves, Shadow backed up a few paces and burst into the small clearing in front of the cave where most of the wolves were. Panting heavily for affect, Shadow growled at the forest, pretending something was there. All the other wolves looked at him in confusion and with curiosity. After a moment of silence, a rich brown wolf approached him. The stranger's large, muscular build seemed oddly unintimidating. Maybe it was his warm midnight blue eyes or friendly wolfish grin. Either way, he seemed nice enough not to attack. "Hello, stranger." the brown wolf barked in a friendly tone. This guys voice was deep! "Uh...hi." Shadow replied unsurely. "The name's Titus, what's your's? Oh, and while I'm asking questions, why were you being chased back there?" the large brown wolf's broad head swing toward the dense forest beside them. "I'm Shadow...my pack...erm old pack was chasing me out of the territory. Anyway, what kinda group is this?" Shadow asked, nodding toward the other wolves. "We're not really what you'd call a group...maybe friends? You can stay with us if you'd like. Most of us are pretty accepting." Titus chuckled.

After introducing Shadow to everyone, Titus bumped the black wolf playfully.
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